My 2 artifacts analysis- English 12

 This semester, for English 12 I feel that I have improved in my writing structure. I remember that I use to struggle quite a lot on my essays, however with a little bit of hard work I feel that I have gotten better! I have posted two pictures below, one picture of my previous essay mark, and the other about my recent mark-on the narrative essay. I wish that I will be able to improve more in English and also anything else that I am capable of doing. I know that if I am determined and motivated I can achieve more and be more confident. For instance, as the saying goes; " I am not trying to compete with anyone, except myself'". Therefore, I believe that one should follow their own path and try to be better, than they were yesterday. In addition, I am happy with my achievement- even though it may be small, and I hope I can always improve and achieve my goals.